Michigan Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Michigan Investors

United States > Michigan

I am a Michigan-based business owner and operator with 14+ years of experience in sales, customer service, operations, and team management. I previously owned and operated a wireless retail business and currently work in healthcare operations, where I help manage daily workflow, patient experience, staffing, reporting, billing support, and process improvements. I am interested in investing in strong, practical businesses with clear revenue potential, especially in service-based, healthcare, retail, home service, technology, logistics, and local growth opportunities. I bring more than just capital — I can offer hands-on business experience, sales strategy, operational support, marketing insight, customer acquisition ideas, and local Michigan market knowledge. I am looking for serious entrepreneurs with a clear plan, strong work ethic, and realistic growth goals. I am open to being either a hands- on investor, advisor, or strategic partner depending on the opportunity.

$50,000 to $150,000

United States > Michigan

Looking for high yield investment opportunities.

$1,000 to $200,000

United States > Michigan

Entrepreneur and business owner. Licensed real estate broker. Licensed building contractor in Michigan and Florida. Bachelor's degree from Michigan State University in construction management. Paralegal experience. Access to wholesale building finishes (flooring, cabinets, countertops, furniture). BBG supplier. Seeking investment opportunities for portfolio diversification. Silent or advisory involvement.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Michigan

Individual investor. I currently work in supply chain & logistics within a manufacturing environment, and I've held a variety of other roles in purchasing and sales in the past. I also currently own a couple rental properties as well as a small residential cleaning business. I have a B.B.A. - Supply Chain and am currently enrolled in an M.B.A. program. I'm a young professional with the entrepreneurial looking for my next project. I'm open to being as involved as necessary and putting in some work, or a silent partner.

$100,000 to $5,000,000

United States > Michigan

Currently working in healthcare and real estate. Looking to be either active or silent.

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > Michigan

Healthcare executive in Grand Rapids. Partner in multiple different companies. Looking to expand my investment portfolio. Most interested in a silent or advisory role.

$0 to $100,000

United States > Michigan

34 yo male married with 3 amazing kids living the American dream. I live in southeast Michigan in Dearborn city. Started in the medical field at the age of 17. Owned a durable medical equipment company along with a few other businesses. Got into medical marijuana in 2012 full time. Looking to diversify and secure my family financially. I see a lot of potential for entrepreneurs to pivot in the right direction due to Covid 19. I would like to be apart of that venture with the right team.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > Michigan

I am 52 years old residing in Novi, MI. I grew up in a family business environment and have been lucky enough to operate businesses from start-up to $50 million in annual revenue. I have experiencing buying and selling companies as well as starting two franchise operations. I have worked in multiple industries including Healthcare, Training and Education, Staffing and Consulting, Software Sales and Training, and Management Consulting. I have worked with clients that ranged from small business to Fortune 100. I currently work as an advisor helping business owners create and implement execution strategies and tools to grow their businesses to the next level. I have a BBA from Western Michigan University. I am interested in both hands-on and advisory roles and investments could be placed as an individual or investment group.

$10,000 to $250,000