Michigan Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Michigan Investors

United States > Michigan

I am married with three kids and I am 30 years old. I have owned and operated 2 companies for the past 10 years employing 5-10 people. My first company is a service provider for pharmaceutical clean room air quality testing and certification. My other company is a pharmaceutical supply company selling specific compounding equipment and small products used within pharmacy clean rooms. I carry the two accreditation’s required for certification work in the compounding pharmaceutical industry. I am a graduate of central Michigan university with a bachelors degree in entrepreneurial studies and minor in sales. I am an individual investor. I have small investment experience as a silent partner with investment under 5K. I recently sold part of my certification company and have liquid capital. I prefer to be hands on if possible. I believe anyone should know and understand the processes of a specific business venture. Thank you

$1,000 to $100,000

United States > Michigan

Engineering manager with 12 years experience in automotive & aerospace including internal combustion engines, turbine engines, and vehicle automation. Product design, design for manufacturing, simulation. Vast network of experts. Based in Ann Arbor, Michigan. PhD, M.S. & B.S. in Mechanical Engineering from Purdue University. Published research in areas of engine air handling, engine and vehicle controls, and vehicle automation. Private pilot (single-engine, land) with 200+ hours flight time. Interested in hands-on involvement for the right opportunity where it makes sense, otherwise advisory or silent investor.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > Michigan

My husband and I are located near the Grand Rapids, MI area. I have a degree in Business Administration with a major in Accounting, and also have had my real estate license since 2022, for investment opportunities. My background is in construction accounting and also public accounting. My husband teaches marketing and entrepreneurship at a local ISD. I have a love for real estate and am passionate about finding affordable home solutions for individuals or families. I am also interested in sustainability and protecting our environment while also living a healthy lifestyle. One of my goals is to build either tiny homes, small footprint homes or cabins for people who want to live a simple life and provide housing for their families. I would love to be actively involved in the process from start to finish if possible, or wherever my skills and knowledge would be useful.

$10,000 to $150,000

United States > Michigan

Former community bank president, 10 yrs experience as private investor/consultant. Now leads group of investors.

$10,000 to $200,000

United States > Michigan

My partner and I have long-term business liquidity partners and help companies with inventory financing, working capital financing, real estate acquisition, factoring, business acquisition, IP-backed funding, equipment financing, refinancing debt, and mergers. We work with middle market business owners, executives and their agents seeking debt solutions.

$200,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Michigan

38 year old female in the Title industry. I’m looking for investment opportunities to provide financial independence and security. I want to diversify my portfolio. I would like to be a silent partner or partner to learn more on investing.

$1,000 to $40,000

United States > Michigan

My full background from the beginning is that I graduated college which led to sometime in Anesthesia. I eventually left clinical work for a lab career at Thermofisher Vaccine Sciences. After which I transitioned to being a Researcher at a medical school. During these various jobs I had two online side businesses. A ebay antiques business and a print on demand Etsy shop. Eventually using the success from these two businesses I paid off my student loans and decided to pursue a different road in life, business. I then purchased a bakery and I have been running it for several years now. I currently have 12 employees handling the day to day tasks for me and I have reached a stage where I only work a few days a week. Thus, I would like to invest in a new venture and I am committed to ensure it's as successful as my previous endeavors. I am more than willing to put in the work where needed though if I feel you know what you're doing I am more than happy being silent as well.

$0 to $10,000,000

United States > Michigan

I’m a retired Marine Corps officer currently in the airline industry looking to develop an investment portfolio as a silent partner and perhaps as an advisor.

$1 to $100,000