Michigan Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Michigan Investors

United States > Michigan

I have owned a successful small business. Currently running a department of salespeople for a large tech company.

$5,000 to $100,000

United States > Michigan

Engineering manager with 12 years experience in automotive & aerospace including internal combustion engines, turbine engines, and vehicle automation. Product design, design for manufacturing, simulation. Vast network of experts. Based in Ann Arbor, Michigan. PhD, M.S. & B.S. in Mechanical Engineering from Purdue University. Published research in areas of engine air handling, engine and vehicle controls, and vehicle automation. Private pilot (single-engine, land) with 200+ hours flight time. Interested in hands-on involvement for the right opportunity where it makes sense, otherwise advisory or silent investor.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > Michigan

My partner and I seek to invest equity into established businesses. We invest our own capital. We seek to deploy Growth Equity Capital into well managed companies that need capital for growth or perpetuation purposes. We do seek to have majority control. We do not look to run our companies on a day to day basis because we seek to leverage existing management teams and help them grow. Our goal is to provide advisory support and to make major decisions (acquisitions, sale of company, etc). My background includes spending 30+ years in Commercial and Investment Banking. I have advised many families and many companies to help maximize their business opportunities.

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Michigan

CPA with 5 years of experience in the Financial Services Industry now working in Finance and Accounting for one of the United States largest Cannabis Cultivation and Processing Companies. Interested in investing in the Cannabis Industry.

$10,000 to $200,000

United States > Michigan

Offering more than twenty years’ of leadership and business development experience, my expertise lies in creating start-up companies and consistently steering them to achieve year-on-year growth. Success in this regard has relied on an ability to define strategic vision and set the organizational tone, prioritizing a culture of excellence. Underpinning my skills as a strategist is exhaustive experience of “getting the show on the road”: creating structures, managing all aspects of organizational activity and enhancing efficiency and effectiveness. My consultancy firm and its subsidiaries specialized in robotics simulation, process development, integration services, and staffing solutions, and I currently hold six patents relating to the calibration of offline programs with industrial robots.

$5,000 to $100,000

United States > Michigan

My partner and I have long-term business liquidity partners and help companies with inventory financing, working capital financing, real estate acquisition, factoring, business acquisition, IP-backed funding, equipment financing, refinancing debt, and mergers. We work with middle market business owners, executives and their agents seeking debt solutions.

$200,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Michigan

Looking to invest and/or have an active role in a Michigan cannabis company. I am 45 years old, married with adult-age children living in northern Oakland county. I am a results-driven leader with over 25 years of experience in the military and Fortune 100 space. My experience is in developing, monitoring, and managing large-scale sales and operational teams. Offering an array of experience in strategic vision implementation, business/financial acumen, talent acquisition and development, performance analysis, campaign management, marketing/advertising, and problem fixer. Proven ability to multi-task and yield results in high-intensity, dynamic environments while driving growth and focusing on customer service excellence. I hold an MBA from Walsh College and love the plant.

$50,000 to $150,000

United States > Michigan

Individual investor. I currently work in supply chain & logistics within a manufacturing environment, and I've held a variety of other roles in purchasing and sales in the past. I also currently own a couple rental properties as well as a small residential cleaning business. I have a B.B.A. - Supply Chain and am currently enrolled in an M.B.A. program. I'm a young professional with the entrepreneurial looking for my next project. I'm open to being as involved as necessary and putting in some work, or a silent partner.

$100,000 to $5,000,000